Michael Corner (![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
alt_michael) wrote2012-11-19 02:02 pm
alt_michael) wrote2012-11-19 02:02 pm
Private Message to Linus Moon
Lines, mate,
Can you look over my essay for Dolohov? I want to brush it up one last time but now we've got to turn them in Thursday and there's all that Potions and Charms and Astronomy to finish up before then.
I just think the section on spells that create hypermobility could use a little more, I dunno, more depth. If you know what I mean?
If you can look at it today I should have time to redraft it by Thursday, don't you think?
And you could have another slice of my birthday cake, if you like. I've got about four pieces left, so that's one more for me and Bitsy andSally-Anne someone else.
Can you look over my essay for Dolohov? I want to brush it up one last time but now we've got to turn them in Thursday and there's all that Potions and Charms and Astronomy to finish up before then.
I just think the section on spells that create hypermobility could use a little more, I dunno, more depth. If you know what I mean?
If you can look at it today I should have time to redraft it by Thursday, don't you think?
And you could have another slice of my birthday cake, if you like. I've got about four pieces left, so that's one more for me and Bitsy and