Private Message to Sally-Anne and Linus
Nov. 20th, 2012 12:08 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
alt_michaelLines, I'm looking over the notes you wrote on my essay and--well, I didn't think it was bad as all that, was it?
I mean, the bit about the protective spells. I guess you could use it as sort of a notification spell, too, and that's really a good point. I could put that in. Although it sort of changes the whole point, but that's okay, it's worth including it.
But I thought the sneezing ones were sort of clever, anyway. And the nosebleed one. I guess if you really think they're naff, or too simple, I could think of some others.
Perks, you've already turned yours in, right? If I took out two or three of the spells Lines thinks are bad choices, would you want to look up some others with me in the library, after lessons? I've only got 'til Thursday if I'm going to redo the essay.
I mean, the bit about the protective spells. I guess you could use it as sort of a notification spell, too, and that's really a good point. I could put that in. Although it sort of changes the whole point, but that's okay, it's worth including it.
But I thought the sneezing ones were sort of clever, anyway. And the nosebleed one. I guess if you really think they're naff, or too simple, I could think of some others.
Perks, you've already turned yours in, right? If I took out two or three of the spells Lines thinks are bad choices, would you want to look up some others with me in the library, after lessons? I've only got 'til Thursday if I'm going to redo the essay.
Private message to Michael
on 2012-11-20 05:43 pm (UTC)Re: Private message to Michael
on 2012-11-20 05:59 pm (UTC)And he's got a good point about how Professor Dolohov likes duelling.
I don't know. What do you think I ought to do?
Re: Private message to Michael
on 2012-11-20 06:13 pm (UTC)Er, I'm sorry.
It just occurred to me that you might be cross because you've turned yours in already and now you couldn't change it if you wished to do?
I didn't mean it that way, though. Just that you're clever enough your essay was probably fine. I'm not that clever, see.
Re: Private message to Michael
on 2012-11-20 06:15 pm (UTC)Well. Let's just say I'm glad Linus isn't the one who'd be marking this for real.
Look, I've got Charms. Can I meet you after lessons and you can see it for yourself?
Re: Private message to Michael
on 2012-11-20 06:19 pm (UTC)2. I'm perfectly happy with my paper, thanks.
3. Sure. Library or Great Hall or somewhere else?
Re: Private message to Michael
on 2012-11-21 03:46 am (UTC)I think you're right and that section about the spells' co-valances really needs another couple paragraphs. I'll put something in tomorrow.
I like revising with you, though. Has anyone ever told you you're a good partner? For homework, I mean.
Re: Private message to Michael
on 2012-11-21 03:56 am (UTC)Re: Private message to Michael
on 2012-11-21 04:32 am (UTC)Did you see who just commented on Madam Umbridge's post?
I hate it whenever he pops up not being dead.
Re: Private message to Michael
on 2012-11-21 04:35 am (UTC)Re: Private message to Michael
on 2012-11-21 04:36 am (UTC)Re: Private message to Michael
on 2012-11-21 04:42 am (UTC)I mean, at least she's given us badges. And tea.
But.
Those kittensWell, anyway. At least she'll be teaching something she knows about, maybe? With her experience and all that.
Re: Private message to Michael
on 2012-11-21 04:44 am (UTC)Did you get any of the badges last time?
Re: Private message to Michael
on 2012-11-21 04:51 am (UTC)Re: Private message to Michael
on 2012-11-21 04:52 am (UTC)